1. I like the coming of age essay because the way that you set the scene was how the atmosphere actually felt at the time. 2.I liked how you throughly explained each trait. I think that when you write, you shouldn't write so much like how you talk.3. I feel that Voice was the most successful for you because you have a strong personality, and it shows through your writing.4.You should improve on organization because sometimes your writing can be out of oder and sentences can be put in different places.
1. I like the coming of age essay because the way that you set the scene was how the atmosphere actually felt at the time.
ReplyDelete2.I liked how you throughly explained each trait. I think that when you write, you shouldn't write so much like how you talk.
3. I feel that Voice was the most successful for you because you have a strong personality, and it shows through your writing.
4.You should improve on organization because sometimes your writing can be out of oder and sentences can be put in different places.