Tuesday, April 29, 2014

Merchant of Venice Essay

Not everyone is who they seem to be when first introduced. Merchant of Venice by William Shakespeare has characters that fit this description. It is a play of different people, and their troubles in their life. You find out in the end who the characters really seem to be, and their real reactions and personalities. Mainly there is two important parts of the story. There is a man named Bassanio, and he has love for Portia, a princess, who also has feelings for Bassanio. On another side of the story, a Jew named Shylock makes an agreement with Bassanio, and his good friend Antonio, a christian merchant. Their agreement is to take a loan from Shylock for Bassanio to be with Portia. Shylock, the Jew, seems normal and somewhat snobby in the beginning, but as the story goes on, he is a crazy, poor, greedy man who loses everything.

Shylock has had many disturbances with Christians because he is a jew, so is serious about any deal he makes with Antonio. Although, Antonio is also serious about the deal. “If you don’t repay me on such a day, at such a place, such sum or sums as are in the contract, let the forfeit be agreed for a full pound of your fair flesh.” 2.6.49-50. Shylock is being crazy in the first place for ever wanting a pound of Antonio’s flesh. Even if the deal involves 3,000 ducats, a dead man does not equal up to that money. Something better would be a double up of money, not a pound of flesh. Shylock has always been bullied by people like Antonio. He says that the week before, Antonio spit on him for being a Jew. Shylock just wants revenge from all the Christians. With this bond, Skylock will always be on top, as it seems. He gets 3,000 ducats, or Christian flesh. Which, he doesn’t mind having since he hates Christians. Shylock is a crazy man who wants revenge and money


This Jew is also known for his greediness. His daughter Jessica has ran away from him with Lorenzo, a Christian. She wants to transform into Christianity, and forever leave her father. Through Shylock’s eyes, this isn’t the big problem. “My daughter! Oh, my ducats! Oh, my daughter! Fled with a Christian! Oh, my Christian money! Justice!” 2.8.15-16. Even if his daughter is running away from him, he is still worried about his money. His daughter robbed him, but he doesn’t care as much about her, but for the money. Shylock tells Jessica to stay in the house and not leave with Lancelot, Lorenzo’s friend. He doesn’t do a good job of making her listen. She dresses as a man and runs away with her love. This shows that Shylock doesn’t have as much care for her than his money. If he loved her, he would’ve put guards, and make sure that she wouldn’t flee with the “damn” Christian. His greediness overtakes him, as you can see, this is important towards the end as Shylock does not only lose his daughter.

Shylock is a poor man, but it’s his fault for being so careless and stupid. Antonio loses his ships, and cannot repay the debt. By this time, Shylock is crazy, so he is very eager to take his Christian flesh. Bassanio offers to pay him more, but he refuses ti take the money. “You’ll ask my why i rather choose to have a weight of carrion flesh than to receive three thousand ducats: I’ll not answer that!” 4.1.40-42. Shylock is still greedy, but not for money. He is now greedy for his revenge on the Christian, He’d much rather have the flesh now, he’s lost everything, and this is the only thing that he can own, and be happy with. “But in the cutting it, if thou dost shed one drop of Christian blood, thy lands and good due by the laws of Venice confiscate undo the state of Venice.” 4.1.449-450. Portia comes to the court, dressed as a lawyer, and saves Antonio’s life by finding a loop hole in the bond. Shylock is depressed, mad and not to be blamed. Although, he could’ve read the bond, and know that whoever wrote the bond was not on the favorable side of Shylock. It does not make sense to cut flesh and not have blood. Due to Shylock’s carelessness he is now very depressed and doesn’t want to live. He doesn’t know what to do with his life. He was crazy ever since the beginning, and now he seems to be the innocent one, but also the enemy. 


Shylock is a greedy, poor, and careless man with nothing. There were just problems building on top of each other for him. First, his daughter runs away with his money, and then figures out in the end that the “better” end of the bond failed for him. He was too selfish and greedy. he tried to rush everything, and didn’t pay attention to more important things. Instead of just thinking of ducats or Christian flesh, what about the actual bond. He was being stupid about the bond and how it was written. He didn’t even read the bond. There were many different perceptions of Shylock in this book, from beginning to end. He turned out to be crazy in the end, but also having nothing. That’s who he really is, and how he turned out to be in the end, a maniac. 

Friday, March 28, 2014

Statements Comments


  • Don’t rely on outward appearances when making judgments. 
I agree with this statement because what truly identifies a person is what's on the inside. You cannot judge a person just by how they look. A person that may look bad still could be kind and innocent. Before I thought that this person was really mean, but he turned out to be really nice.
  • Justice is always blind.
I don't agree with this statement  because justice isn't blind. People may think that because they always try to catch you doing things wrong. Although, that is your job, and it's your fault for doing the wrong thing anyway. When I was little, I always thought that the police were mean, and don't understand what they are doing, but I understand that it's my fault.
  • A brotherly love between two friends can be just as strong as an intimate love between a man and a woman.
I agree with this because friends are always there for you. There isn't much that boyfriends or girlfriends can do more of. They still care for you and are kind to you. Most times I would take my friends over a girl.
  • You can break a promise as long as you have a good excuse
This can sometimes be true, but most of the times not. It depends what the excuse is. If you are not suppose to tell someone something because it's a secret, then it might be acceptable. I used to be a bad secret keeper, so I couldn't keep a promise.
  • Love is blind.
I disagree with this because love is not blind. You have to find it yourself, and the one that you love. Love is not an accident, it has a purpose. 
  • Stereotypes are often right.
I disagree because stereotypes are not for everyone. Not every asian is smart. These are false accusations. I am accused for being smart and cannot see.
  • An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth is a good motto to live by.
I do not agree with this because not everything needs to have payback. Sometimes things happen as a mistake. You don't have to be punished for everything. A lot of bad things happen to me from other people, but most of the time, i don't give payback.

Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Of Mice and Men Vocabulary


Sullenness (adj.)- gloomy, sluggish, and slow.
"She paused and her face lost its sullenness and grew interested." Page 78
At the funeral when we made our prayer the whole church grew great sullenness and depression.

Liniment (noun)- a liquid that is rubbed on your skin to relieve pain.
"Crooks sat on his bunk and looked at the door for a moment and then he reached for the liniment bottle." Page 83
Matthew applied liniment to his ankle to secure that he won't get infections.

Reverently (adj.)- angrily or with great feeling.
"George said reverently, "Jesus Christ! I bet we could swing her." " Page 60
Naomi reverently yelled at Kaz, "Stop singing, it's so annoying!"

Monday, February 3, 2014

Metaphoric poem final draft



I am an Encyclopedia
An open book
But hard to understand
I serve a special purpose
To give people knowledge
To convince them
To get them on my side
I work hard to help others
Especially the ones in need
All they need is info
All they do is plead
They don't want help from me
I'm just boring on the outside
But if you get to know me
I am pretty interesting
So c'mon ask me things
I will not lie to you
I hold many thing
Not only facts
But secrets, too
People say that I'm so intellectual
But that's not the true me
I know lots of things
But funny things and jokes
You probably think I'm a know it all
But I promise that you'll love me
I may look just boring
But on the inside
You'll see how colorful and filled with different things
I help you with homework and cool facts
Not interested? Cant blame you
I am an encyclopedia