YOU HAVE TOO MUCH TEXT, YOUR GRAPHIC SHOULD DO MOST OF THE SPEAKING. ADD ONE LINE AT THE MOST FROM YOU POEM WITH YOUR METAPHOR. ALSO THE FIRST IMAGES JUST LOOKS LIKE A WHITE BOX WITH YOU ON IT. TRY TO FIND AN ACTUAL ENCYCLOPEDIA AND BLEND THE IMAGE OF YOU ON IT. AS(2+)
YOU HAVE TOO MUCH TEXT, YOUR GRAPHIC SHOULD DO MOST OF THE SPEAKING. ADD ONE LINE AT THE MOST FROM YOU POEM WITH YOUR METAPHOR. ALSO THE FIRST IMAGES JUST LOOKS LIKE A WHITE BOX WITH YOU ON IT. TRY TO FIND AN ACTUAL ENCYCLOPEDIA AND BLEND THE IMAGE OF YOU ON IT. AS(2+)
ReplyDeleteI liked your graphic card it really matches you but u should make it more interesting something funny that catches the eye
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